How could art be appreciated and enjoyed by more people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Art is seen as expensive hobby.
For art to be attractive, art should avoid this image.
It should becomes that everyone can get art culture easily.
강사 첨삭
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-T. Julia
Art is seen as expensive hobby.
>> Art is seen as an expensive hobby.
For art to be attractive, art should avoid this image.
>> Correct
It should becomes that everyone can get art culture easily.
>> It should be that everyone can easily access art and culture.
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