How could public transport in your city be improved?
학생이 쓴 원문
Public transport in my city could be improved by adding more bus and subway.
The public transport must keep on time.
* Hi, Donna
I did not feel well, so I could not attend the classe. I am feeling better now.
I will see you in class tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
Your country has the best subway system and a very efficient bus system too. Of course, it would be better if there would be more to accommodate everyone. Then, people might consider not driving a car anymore.
You have a few grammar suggestions. Please study them well. Good job!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
The public transport must keep on time.
>> Public transport in my city could be improved by adding more buses and subways.
The public transport must be on time.
* Hi, Donna
I did not feel well, so I could not attend the classe. I am feeling better now.
I will see you in class tomorrow.
The public transport must be on time.
* Hi, Donna
I did not feel well, so I could not attend the classe. I am feeling better now.
I will see you in class tomorrow.
>> Hi, Donna
I did not feel well, so I could not attend the class. I am feeling better now.I will see you in class tomorrow.
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