How creative are you?
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강사 첨삭
Your creative skill has been unlocked, Sir [이름]!
I guess by the help of your kids, you learned to be more creative because you didn\'t have a choice. hahaha! Our thoughts are parallel, being creative leads you to endless opportunities. Two thumbs up!
~Teacher Eunice
A creative person has an ability to invent and develop something new, especially in the art.
>>> correct!
My children frequently ask me draw animals instead of them but I don\'t have any talent of drawing.
>>> My children frequently ask me to draw animals instead of them, but I don\'t have any talents in drawing.
Arts was the subject that I really hate because I could not draw a picture.
>>> correct!
Not only my drawing skill but also ideas were problem for me.
>>> Not only my drawing skill but also creating ideas were problems for me.
I admire people who are good at arts.
>>> correct!
However, I think I don\'t have talent about it and there is no need that I have to try to do it.
>>> However, I think I don\'t have a talent in the art and there is no need to try it.
The education I have gotten is not enough to make people creative and it is not a good way of education system.
>>> The education I have gotten is not enough to make people creative.
We are living in the 4th industrial revolution and all the country need creative people to develop their country.
>>> We are living in the 4th industrial revolution, and all countries need creative people to develop their country.
If we would like to adapt very well in this century, I recommend people to try to be a creative person.
>>> If we would like to adapt very well in this century, I recommend people to try to be creative.
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