How creative are you?

2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

A creative person has an ability to invent and develop something new, especially in the art. My children frequently ask me draw animals instead of them but I don't have any talent of drawing. Arts was the subject that I really hate because I could not draw a picture. Not only my drawing skill but also ideas were problem for me. I admire people who are good at arts. However, I think I don't have talent about it and there is no need that I have to try to do it. The education I have gotten is not enough to make people creative and it is not a good way of education system. We are living in the 4th industrial revolution and all the country need creative people to develop their country. If we would like to adapt very well in this century, I recommend people to try to be a creative person.

강사 첨삭

Your creative skill has been unlocked, Sir [이름]!

I guess by the help of your kids, you learned to be more creative because you didn\'t have a choice. hahaha! Our thoughts are parallel, being creative leads you to endless opportunities. Two thumbs up!

~Teacher Eunice


A creative person has an ability to invent and develop something new, especially in the art.

>>> correct!

My children frequently ask me draw animals instead of them but I don\'t have any talent of drawing.

>>> My children frequently ask me to draw animals instead of them, but I don\'t have any talents in drawing.  

Arts was the subject that I really hate because I could not draw a picture.
>>> correct!

Not only my drawing skill but also ideas were problem for me. 

>>> Not only my drawing skill but also creating ideas were problems for me. 

I admire people who are good at arts.

>>> correct!

However, I think I don\'t have talent about it and there is no need that I have to try to do it.
>>>
However, I think I don\'t have a talent in the art and there is no need to try  it.

The education I have gotten is not enough to make people creative and it is not a good way of education system.
>>> The education
I have gotten is not enough to make people creative.

We are living in the 4th industrial revolution and all the country need creative people to develop their country.
>>>
We are living in the 4th industrial revolution, and all countries need creative people to develop their country. 

If we would like to adapt very well in this century, I recommend people to try to be a creative person.

>>> If we would like to adapt very well in this century, I recommend people to try to be creative.


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