How did COVID19 affect social gatherings in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
As COVID 19 pandemic has continued for a long time , virtual meetings are getting more commonplace while in-person gatherings are restricted.
In many schools and companies, video conferencing-related devices have been set up for classes and meetings. People who were uncomfortable at first seem to be getting used to the convenience of video conferencing.
As a result, restaurants that earn profits from face-to-face meetings are virtually closed. Although the government has provided some financial support to small business owners and eased loan conditions, it does not seem to be enough for them.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve! Great job!
You were able to construct sentences with proper grammar.
- Debbie
>> As the COVID19 pandemic continues, virtual meetings are becoming more commonplace while face-to-face gatherings are restricted.
In many schools and companies, video conferencing-related devices have been set up for classes and meetings.
>> This is a good sentence.
People who were uncomfortable at first seem to be getting used to the convenience of video conferencing.
>> This is a good sentence.
As a result, restaurants that earn profits from face-to-face meetings are virtually closed.
>> As a result, restaurants that earn profits from face-to-face meetings are closed.
Although the government has provided some financial support to small business owners and eased loan conditions, it does not seem to be enough for them.
>> Although the government has provided some financial support to small business owners and eased loan conditions, they do not seem to be enough for them.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.