how did I come to like
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Until high school, I enjoyed listening to ballads because the songs melody makes me feel comfortable. And also I often studied with my mp3 player turned on, so intentionally I used to choose the song that would not disturb studying.
But one day, when I entered university, I watched a hip hop tv program by chance. That tv program was one of the most popular hip hop survival hip hop audition. In that program, I watched a male rapper whose name is \'bewhy\' rapping and his rapping was new and makes me feel exciting. From that day, I watched that tv program every week because I wanted to see what kind of stage would be performed. After the end of the program, I tried to copy his hip hop song and spent lots of time practicing rapping since I wanted not only to listening to hip hop music but also to be able to rap for myself. This is how i became to like hip hop music
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Hello Jayson ^_^
Thank you for making your homework. It means a lot to know more about you with these essay.
Cheers! Teacher Annie
Until high school, I enjoyed listening to ballads because the songs melody makes me feel comfortable.
>> When I was in high school, I enjoyed listening to ballad songs because the melody makes me feel comfortable.
And also I often studied with my mp3 player turned on, so intentionally I used to choose the song that would not disturb studying.
>> Moreover, I often study with my mp3 player on. I usually choose the songs which are not noisy so that it will not disturb me while studying.
But one day, when I entered university, I watched a hip hop tv program by chance.
>> But one day, I accidentally watched a hip hop TV program when I was about to enter university.
That tv program was one of the most popular hip hop survival hip hop audition.
>> The TV program was one of the most popular survival hip hop audition.
In that program, I watched a male rapper whose name is \'bewhy\' rapping and his rapping was new and makes me feel exciting.
>> On the same program, I witnessed a male rapper named Bewhy. His rapping style was new and it made me feel excited.
From that day, I watched that tv program every week because I wanted to see what kind of stage would be performed.
>> From that day on, I started watching the TV program every week. I wanted to see what would be the next performance like.
After the end of the program, I tried to copy his hip hop song and spent lots of time practicing rapping since I wanted not only to listening to hip hop music but also to be able to rap for myself.
>> At the end of the program, I try to copy the way he raps and I even spend a lot of time practicing. Yes I like listening to hip hop but I also wanted to learn how to rap.
This is how i became to like hip hop music.
>> This is the reason why I came to like hip hop music.
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