How did people keep in touch with friends in the past, before social networks came along? Would you
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When I was a child, I didn\'t have social networks and a cell phone. When I want to meet a friend, I should go to my friend\'s house to call him. Of course, we had have home phones, but it was expensive. I could use it. Sometime, a friend moved to other city, I didn\'t have a way to connect to him. Moving to other city means disconnection with friends. When I was 20, a website was popular. The web site name was \'I love school\'. If I visit that web site. I could connect to my elementary school friends. If I can go to those days, I would go and I would make a web site as like \'I love school\'.
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Hello [이름]ny,
Thank you for your homework! What a very interesting website that you used in the past, thanks for telling me about it,
Regards,
T. Angelica
When I was a child, I didn\'t have social networks and a cell phone. >> When I was a child, I didn\'t have an SNS account or a cellphone.
When I want to meet a friend, I should go to my friend\'s house to call him.
>> If I wanted to meet a friend, I should go to my friend\'s house to call him.
Of course, we had have home phones, but it was expensive.
>> Of course, we had home phones that I could use but they were expensive.
I could use it. Sometime, a friend moved to other city, I didn\'t have a way to connect to him.
>> When a friend moved to another city, I didn\'t have any way to connect with him.
Moving to other city means disconnection with friends.
>> Moving to another city meant disconnection with friends.
When I was 20, a website was popular. The web site name was \'I love school\'.
>> When I was 20 years old, a website named \"I love school\" was popular.
If I visit that web site. I could connect to my elementary school friends.
>> I was able to connect to my elementary school friends through that website.
If I can go to those days, I would go and I would make a web site as like \'I love school\'.
>> If I can back go back to the past, I would also make a website like \"I love school\".
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