How did soccer become your national sport?
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Since 1987, we started military dictatorship. they could use 3s policy.
that is SPORTS, SEX, SCREEN. If they thought most people use 3s, easily can reign in power.
that day after, in korea developted soccer.
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Good day, Dan!
I think it\'s good that they choose Sports over other thikngs to maintain their power.
Thanks for sharing this. Have a nice day!
Aki~
Since 1987, we started military dictatorship. they could use 3s policy. that is SPORTS, SEX, SCREEN.
>>> Since 1987, we have been under military dictatorship, employing the 3S policy: SPORTS, SEX, and SCREEN.
If they thought most people use 3s, easily can reign in power.
>>> The regime believed that by focusing on these three aspects, they could easily maintain power, assuming that most people would be preoccupied with them.
that day after, in korea developted soccer.
>>> However, following that period, soccer began to flourish in Korea.
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