how did the miscroscope contribute to the development of medicine?
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Microscope contributed by enabling scientists to see micro organisms, tissues and cells. And helped observing how foreign body attack cells. And how cells counteract them.
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How did the miscroscope contribute to the development of medicine?
Microscope contributed by enabling scientists to see micro organisms, tissues and cells.
>>> The microscope contributed by enabling scientists to see microorganisms, tissues, and cells.
>>> OR: Thanks to the microscope, scientists could see tiny organisms and cells, and learn how cells fight back when attacked by foreign substances.
And helped observing how foreign body attack cells. And how cells counteract them.
>>> It also helped scientists observe how foreign bodies attack cells and how cells counteract them.
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