How did the pandemic affect you the most?
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How did the pandemic affect you the most?
The pandemic has changed how we work and take classes.
The good things my lifestyle changed to better eating habits, getting healthier.
But the pandemic has triggered a mental health issue.
They are feeling depression and social isolation.
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Hi [이름]!
It really changed our lives drastically. :(
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The good things my lifestyle changed to better eating habits, getting healthier.
The pandemic has changed how we work and take classes.
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The good things my lifestyle changed to better eating habits, getting healthier.
>> The good thing that happened to my lifestyle is that my eating habits changed which made me healthier.
But the pandemic has triggered a mental health issue.
>> But the pandemic triggered people\'s mental health issue.
They are feeling depression and social isolation.
>> They feel depression and social isolation.
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