How did the pandemic affect you the most?

2022-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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First, I was not able to exercise a lot because of the pandemic. I was going to the sports academies, but I was not able to go there because of Covid19. Because of this reason, I am not that flexible than before. But I am going to exercise again, and I will bring my own condition back.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!  

It really changed our lives drastically. :( 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

First, I was not able to exercise a lot because of the pandemic.
>> CORRECT

I was going to the sports academies, but I was not able to go there because of Covid19.
>> I used to go in a sports academy but I couldn\'t anymore because of the pandemic. 

Because of this reason, I am not that flexible than before.
>> CORRECT

But I am going to exercise again, and I will bring my own condition back.
>> CORRECT

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