How did this stroke of luck change your perspective or approach to challenges?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that the fortune smiling on me in need is God, who hasn’t failed to be with me no matter what situation I was in. The more such an experience I have had, the more trust I have had on God. I don’t know the reason of it, God may want to work more challenges through His people. The more faithfully I will obey, the more challenges I will face, but I believe there is His deep thought and plan for me beyond my understanding, which I will be able to come to know it after some time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve. I appreciate you checking the homework question and sharing your thoughts on the matter. We are mere men and we will never understand His plans for us but I believe as you desire and continually seek Him, He will reveal His plans to you according to His will. Have a good night and rest well. See you in our next class. ~Jane ^^
I believe that the fortune smiling on me in need is God, who hasn’t failed to be with me no matter what situation I was in.
>> I believe that the fortune smiling on me indeed is God, who hasn’t failed to be with me no matter what situation I was in.
The more such an experience I have had, the more trust I have had on God.
>> The more experiences I have the more trust I have had in God.
I don’t know the reason of it, God may want to work more challenges through His people.
>> I don’t know the reason for it, God may want to work more challenges through His people.
The more faithfully I will obey, the more challenges I will face, but I believe there is His deep thought and plan for me beyond my understanding, which I will be able to come to know it after some time.
>> The more faithfully I will obey the more challenges I will face but I believe He has deep thoughts and plans for me beyond my understanding, which I will be able to come to know after some time.
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