How did Trump’s administration affect America’s image in other countries?
학생이 쓴 원문
Undoubtedly, the Trump administration deteriorated United States image globally. Now many people think of US as country of tariff, ICE and invasion, and I believe it is one of the accomplishments that Mr. [Name] has achieved. Obviously, tariffs had much influence on this deterioration. This is because United States government is going against not only global norm of free trade but also violating agreement which has been made with other countries. The most striking part was when Mr. [Name] went against NAFTA agreement it ratified with Canada and Mexico in his first term. This has resulted major backlash in Canada where many Canadian citizens are boycotting American products. Alongside this, Mr. [Name] is going against US long-standing ally, European Union, by asserting to either buy or invade Greenland which is the sovereign state part of Denmark. This level of totalitarian ideology aggressively claimed by Mr. [Name] will worsen the US image globally.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this, Aciel!
Undoubtedly, the Trump administration deteriorated United States image globally.
>>> Undoubtedly, the Trump administration deteriorated the United States’ image globally.
Now many people think of US as country of tariff, ICE and invasion, and I believe it is one of the accomplishments that Mr. [Name] has achieved.
>>> Now, many people think of the US as a country of tariffs, ICE, and invasion, and I believe this is one of the “accomplishments” that Mr. [Name] has achieved.
Obviously, tariffs had much influence on this deterioration.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Obviously, tariffs had a strong influence on this deterioration.
This is because United States government is going against not only global norm of free trade but also violating agreement which has been made with other countries.
>>> This is because the United States government went against not only the global norm of free trade but also violated agreements that had been made with other countries.
The most striking part was when Mr. [Name] went against NAFTA agreement it ratified with Canada and Mexico in his first term.
>>> The most striking example was when Mr. [Name] went against the NAFTA agreement that was ratified with Canada and Mexico during his first term.
This has resulted major backlash in Canada where many Canadian citizens are boycotting American products.
>>> This resulted in major backlash in Canada, where many Canadian citizens began boycotting American products.
Alongside this, Mr. [Name] is going against US long-standing ally, European Union, by asserting to either buy or invade Greenland which is the sovereign state part of Denmark.
>>> Alongside this, Mr. [Name] went against a long-standing US ally, the European Union, by asserting that the US should either buy or invade Greenland, which is a sovereign territory that is part of Denmark.
This level of totalitarian ideology aggressively claimed by Mr. [Name] will worsen the US image globally.
>>> correct
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