How did you and your husband meet? Was it love at first sight?
학생이 쓴 원문
I hadn’t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church. But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool. We never chance to meet for a few years. When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. Sometimes he says to me that he wsa very happy at that time. But I didn’t like more than him. I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times. I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking. So we decided to get married. Conclusionally, we didn’t fall in love at first sight.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] [이름]!
Reading your homework makes me feel a romantic excitement until I read the part that you married him because of the hard situation. we can talk about that later if your feel comfortable.
Thank you for sharing :)
Aki~
Aki~
I hadn’t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church.
>>> I hadn’t known him but he had known me a little while we had been going to the same church.
But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool.
>>> But his family decided to go out to America when he was in high school.
We never chance to meet for a few years.
>>> Correct!
When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband.
>>> When I became old enough to get married, a person who has been going to the same church introduced me to my husband.
Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn’t like more than him.
>>> Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn’t like him.
I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times.
>>> Correct!
I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking.
>>> I felt that he was a kind person like others think.
So we decided to get married.
>>> Correct!
In conclusion we didn’t fall in love at first sight.
>>> Correct!
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