How did you became the class president? is it hard to become a class president?

2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Have you ever tried to be a class president? Hello, I'm going to talk to you today about whether it's difficult to be a class president like the one I asked earlier. To be honest with you, I don't think it's that difficult because I've been a lot of bandmasters. So I'm going to talk to you today about how you're going to be more likely to be chosen as your class president. First of all, when you put forward a promise, you never get a general promise: "Clean clean" or "Make the best half." A commitment must be influential. For example, I will make '~!' or break a wooden chopsticks, so I will work hard to break a bone like this! make a pledge in the manner that And, don't be so nervous. They are all friends and classmates who attend the same school anyway. So there's no need to shake. When speaking, if you fall down and get bored, everyone can get bored and yawn. So the speech is as short, as concise and as influential as possible! Don't be nervous when you speak, have fun! Thanks!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, I\'m going to talk to you today about whether it\'s difficult to be a class president like the one I asked earlier.

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To be honest with you, I don\'t think it\'s that difficult because I\'ve been a lot of bandmasters.

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So I\'m going to talk to you today about how you\'re going to be more likely to be chosen as your class president.

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First of all, when you put forward a promise, you never get a general promise: \"Clean clean\" or \"Make the best half.\" A commitment must be influential.

>>CORRECT


For example, I will make \'~!\' or break a wooden chopsticks, so I will work hard to break a bone like this! make a pledge in the manner that
And, don\'t be so nervous.

>>For example, I will make do something big or break a wooden chopsticks, so I will work hard to break a bone like this! make a pledge in some manner and, don\'t be so nervous.



 They are all friends and classmates who attend the same school anyway.

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 So there\'s no need to shake.

>>CORRECT


When speaking, if you fall down and get bored, everyone can get bored and yawn.

>>CORRECT


So the speech is as short, as concise and as influential as possible! Don\'t be nervous when you speak, have fun!

>>CORRECT



 Thanks!!!

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