How did you feel when you first started learning English? Was it easy or hard?
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
You’ve written such a heartfelt and detailed reflection about your English learning journey! It’s wonderful to hear how much you enjoyed studying English when you first started, it really shows that having fun while learning makes a big difference. Your excitement about phonics and how it helped you feel confident is inspiring. It’s true that when we enjoy what we’re doing, it feels much easier and more rewarding.
I understand how studying English in high school became less enjoyable because of the pressure from exams. That’s a common experience, but it’s great that you’ve recognized the importance of enjoying the process. You’re absolutely right, when we find joy in learning, it becomes easier and more meaningful. Keep up the amazing work, and remember, you’re doing so well now! Keep enjoying the process, and the progress will follow.
~Teacher Cathy
When I first started learning English, it was easy.
>>CORRECT
OR>> When I began learning English, it felt easy.
Because I just enjoy to study English, then.
>>Because I just enjoyed studying English back then.
When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to study English and spontaneously enrolled an English academy.
>>When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to study English and spontaneously enrolled in an English academy.
And I thank studying English is easy more than studying many different country’s languages.
>>And I think studying English is easier than studying many different countries\' languages.
It’s because if I only learned ‘phonics’, I can read all of the English words.
>>It’s because if I only learned phonics, I could read all of the English words.
So, I felt English is very interesting language and enjoyed studying it.
>>So, I felt that English is a very interesting language and enjoyed studying it.
Additionally, I can also improve confidence about English.
>>Additionally, I can also improve my confidence in English.
However, when I was a high school student, It’s not funny to study English any more.
>>However, when I was a high school student, studying English was no longer fun.
Because I only have to study it for the college entrance exam.
>>Because I only had to study it for the college entrance exam.
And English is gradually difficult, so I didn’t study hard at that time.
>>And English gradually became more difficult, so I didn’t study hard at that time.
I think ‘enjoy’ is very important thing to study language.
>>I think enjoying is a very important thing when studying a language.
And when I first started learning English, I enjoyed studying it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And when I began learning English, I found enjoyment in studying it.
Therefore, it was EASY for me!
>>CORRECT
OR>>As a result, it was effortless for me!
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