How did you hear about the position?
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw the job application on your website. Since I was elementary school student, I strongly want to be an English teacher so I submitted immediately.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Grace^^
Thank you for answering.
Nice one!
_T. SHAY^^
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I saw the job application on your website.
>>Correct
OR: I saw the job posting on your website.
Since I was elementary school student, I strongly want to be an English teacher so I submitted immediately.
>>Since I was an elementary school student, I have wanted to be an English teacher, so I applied immediately.
OR: I have always wanted to be an English teacher, so I applied right away.
OR: I discovered the job posting on your website. I\'ve been passionate about becoming an English teacher since I was in elementary school, so I applied right away because this opportunity aligns perfectly with my career goals.
Thank you for answering.
Nice one!
_T. SHAY^^
***
I saw the job application on your website.
>>Correct
OR: I saw the job posting on your website.
Since I was elementary school student, I strongly want to be an English teacher so I submitted immediately.
>>Since I was an elementary school student, I have wanted to be an English teacher, so I applied immediately.
OR: I have always wanted to be an English teacher, so I applied right away.
OR: I discovered the job posting on your website. I\'ve been passionate about becoming an English teacher since I was in elementary school, so I applied right away because this opportunity aligns perfectly with my career goals.
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