How did you hear about the position?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was student in university, a professor advised me that this company is known as the best in the field of data. Luckily, a colleague of mine told me about the job opening in your company. I reviewed the job description on job link before applying and it seemed like a great potential fit so I wanted to apply and learn more about the opportunity to see if it’s a good match. So, I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter to the Human Resource department.
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Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
How did you hear about the position?
When I was student in university, a professor advised me that this company is known as the best in the field of data.
>>> When I was a student in the university, a professor informed me that this company is known as the best in the field of data.
Luckily, a colleague of mine told me about the job opening in your company.
>>> CORRECT
I reviewed the job description on job link before applying and it seemed like a great potential fit so I wanted to apply and learn more about the opportunity to see if it’s a good match.
>>> I reviewed the job description on Job Link before applying and it seemed like it\'s a great potential fit. So I wanted to apply and learn more about the opportunity to see if it’s a good match.
So, I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter to the Human Resource department.
>>> That is the reason why I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter to the Human Resource department.
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