How did you hear about this position?
학생이 쓴 원문
How did you hear about this position?
- A month ago, I heard from a colleage friend about the job opening at your company.
Afterwards, I found out the correct information on the job site about the job opening. I immediately submitted my resume and qualifications to your company. I thought it was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up. Because I\'ve been hoping to join your company for a long time. I was more than excited to see that this job position had become available.
I am happy to imagine myself working at your company. That\'s why I hope I can work at your company.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. This is impressive! Your answer is on point. This is certainly the perfect answer when the interviewer asks you this question. Great job, [이름]! Thanks for answering this, and see you in our class!
~ T. Jade^^
How did you hear about this position?
~ T. Jade^^
How did you hear about this position?
A month ago, I heard from a colleage friend about the job opening at your company.
>> A month ago, I heard from a colleague about the job opening at your company.
Afterwards, I found out the correct information on the job site about the job opening.
>> Afterwards, I found the correct information on the job site about the job opening.
>> A month ago, I heard from a colleague about the job opening at your company.
Afterwards, I found out the correct information on the job site about the job opening.
>> Afterwards, I found the correct information on the job site about the job opening.
>> OR: Afterwards, I found the correct information about the job opening on the company\'s website.
I immediately submitted my resume and qualifications to your company.
>> Correct
>> Correct
I thought it was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up.
>> Correct
>> Correct
Because I\'ve been hoping to join your company for a long time.
>> I\'ve been hoping to join your company for a long time.
>> I\'ve been hoping to join your company for a long time.
I was more than excited to see that this job position had become available.
>> Correct
I am happy to imagine myself working at your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: I can envision myself working at your company.
That\'s why I hope I can work at your company.
>> Correct
I am happy to imagine myself working at your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: I can envision myself working at your company.
That\'s why I hope I can work at your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: That\'s why I am eager to become a part of your team.
>> OR: That\'s why I am eager to become a part of your team.
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