How did you stay in touch with friends and family before using social media?
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Hello Eva,
I found your perspective on communicating through phone calls and letters very interesting. I can relate to your feelings about the slower pace of life back then, it often allowed for deeper connections, even if it meant waiting for a response. There’s a certain charm and simplicity of those days that we sometimes overlook in our fast-paced digital world. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of your thoughts in the future!
~Teacher Cathy
Long time ago, when I was young, we didn\'t have smart phone, computer and internet.
>>A long time ago, when I was young, we didn\'t have smartphones, computers, or the internet.
When I need to touch someone, I made a phone call or I wrote a letter.
>>When I needed to be in touch with someone, I made a phone call or wrote a letter.
Sometimes I had meeting with my friend, but something happened for me, so I called to my friend, But my friend went out aleady, l had no way contact with her.
>>I was supposed to meet my friend, but something came up. I called her, but she had already left, and I had no way to contact her.
It is often to happened.
>>It happens quite often.
We had a long wait, we didn\'t know what happened.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We waited for a long time and we didn\'t know what happened.
Our life patten was slow, but we didn\'t know that.
>>Our life pattern was slow, but we didn\'t know that.
Now I think about that, l was very miss analog days.
>>Now that I think about it, I really miss the analog days.
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