How different do you think is the generation now from the generation before?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am pretty sure I\'m an older generation.
Because I feel often big gab between me and my daughter.
For example, my daughter\' generation enjoys shortening long sentences to a few letters.
Also I can\'t understand their fashion style.
They like to wear loose or revealing style clothes.
Their favorite songs are too fast.
I remember my mother said the same thing when I was a student.
I think we need to make an effort to understand them in order to get along well with them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer! :)
I think this is true. The generations before is very different from now. It varies in different aspects like technology, fashion, education and etc.
I think your answer is great. :)
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I am pretty sure I\'m an older generation.
>> I am pretty sure I\'m one of the older generation.
Because I feel often big gab between me and my daughter.
>> It\'s because I often feel that I have a big gap from my daughter.
For example, my daughter\' generation enjoys shortening long sentences to a few letters.
>> For example, my daughter\'s generation enjoys abbreviating long words and sentences.
Also I can\'t understand their fashion style.
>> Also, I can\'t understand their fashion style.
They like to wear loose or revealing style clothes.
>> They like to wear loose or revealing clothes.
Their favorite songs are too fast.
>> Their favorite are rap songs.
I remember my mother said the same thing when I was a student.
>> I remember that my mother said the same thing when I was a student.
I think we need to make an effort to understand them in order to get along well with them.
>> CORRECT
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