How do birthday traditions in your country refelect brother cultural values, such as collectivism or
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My country is visited the birthday people house, and eat food and having a present.
So birthday is very fun day.
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How do birthday traditions in your country reflect broader cultural values?
My country is visited the birthday people house, and eat food and having a present.
>>> In my country, people visit the birthday person’s house, eat food, and give presents.
>>> OR: Traditionally, people go to the birthday celebrant’s home, eat together, and bring gifts.
So birthday is very fun day.
>>> So a birthday is a very fun day.
>>> OR: That’s why birthdays are such happy occasions.
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