How do borrowing and lending affect friendships? Can it make them stronger or weaker?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it depends on the personality. If they have strong responsibility to return item on time, their relationship becomes better after lending and borrowing. Because they get a belief that his friends have to keep their appointment. However, if one of them doesn\'t have careful attitude for lending and late for return or broken items, lending and borrowing makes the relationship worse. Moreover, if the item is important to a person who lends, it is like giving an irrepressible wound.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! You explained both the positive and negative sides clearly, which makes your answer balanced and thoughtful. I especially like how you connected responsibility to trust, that shows strong reasoning. To improve, focus on grammar accuracy and using more natural expressions. Overall, great insight and meaningful explanation!
-Teacher Wela
I think it depends on the personality.
>> I think it depends on their personalities.
If they have strong responsibility to return item on time, their relationship becomes better after lending and borrowing.
>> If they have a strong sense of responsibility to return items on time, their relationship can become stronger after lending and borrowing.
Because they get a belief that his friends have to keep their appointment.
>> This is because they develop trust and believe that their friends will keep their promises.
However, if one of them doesn\'t have careful attitude for lending and late for return or broken items, lending and borrowing makes the relationship worse.
>> However, if one of them is not careful and returns items late or damaged, lending and borrowing can make the relationship worse.
Moreover, if the item is important to a person who lends, it is like giving an irrepressible wound.
>> Moreover, if the item is very important to the lender, losing or damaging it can feel like causing a deep emotional wound.
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