How do cultural exchanges, such as film festivals, contribute to diplomatic relations between countr
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It has been few years that many countries are interested in our culture. There are many singers and actors who have actively worked in Asia but they were not popular in Europe and America. However, people in the world have started to get interested in Korean celebrities since BTS were ranked 1st prize in billboard chart in the USA. BTS has became one of the most powerful boy group in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts. Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about Korea culture from food to cosmetics. Koreans know very well about the power of cultural exchanges these days because we have experienced positive changes a lot. Actually, western people didn\'t welcome Asian people, there was a serious racism but many people are friendly to us and want to socialize with us. I believe that it is the result of cultural exchanges. It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting new serious of Korean drama and have watched
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It has been few years that many countries are interested in our culture.
>> CORRECT!There are many singers and actors who have actively worked in Asia but they were not popular in Europe and America.
>> CORRECT!
However, people in the world have started to get interested in Korean celebrities since BTS were ranked 1st prize in billboard chart in the USA.
>> CORRECT!BTS has became one of the most powerful boy group in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts.
>> BTS has become one of the most powerful boy groups in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts.
Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about Korea culture from food to cosmetics.
Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about Korea culture from food to cosmetics.
>> Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about the Korean culture, from food to cosmetics.
Koreans know very well about the power of cultural exchanges these days because we have experienced positive changes a lot.
>> CORRECT!Koreans know very well about the power of cultural exchanges these days because we have experienced positive changes a lot.
Actually, western people didn\'t welcome Asian people, there was a serious racism but many people are friendly to us and want to socialize with us.
>> CORRECT!I believe that it is the result of cultural exchanges.
>> CORRECT!It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting new serious of Korean drama and have watched
>> It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting for new series of Korean dramas, and have watched most of them in different platforms, like Netflix in particular.
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