How do culture and tradition affect what people see as a vice?
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I think vices are defined differently depending on culture or tradition.
For example, it\'s legal to smoke cannabis in some countries, but it\'s illegal in Korea.
And in the past, people did drugs without any guilty, because they were not realized that is harmful and dangerous.
That\'s why I think people define what is vices according to what they realize is harmful.
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I think vices are defined differently depending on culture or tradition.
>>> correct
For example, it\'s legal to smoke cannabis in some countries, but it\'s illegal in Korea.
For example, it\'s legal to smoke cannabis in some countries, but it\'s illegal in Korea.
>>> correct
And in the past, people did drugs without any guilty, because they were not realized that is harmful and dangerous.
And in the past, people did drugs without any guilty, because they were not realized that is harmful and dangerous.
>>> And in the past, people did drugs without any guilt, because they had yet to realize that it is harmful and dangerous.
>>> OR: And in the past, people used drugs without any guilt because they had not yet realized that they were harmful and dangerous
That\'s why I think people define what is vices according to what they realize is harmful.
That\'s why I think people define what is vices according to what they realize is harmful.
>>> That\'s why I think people define what is a vice according to what they perceive as harmful.
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