How do food and music continue to celebrations?
학생이 쓴 원문
The food is happy to people and music is fun and happy to people for celebrate.
So food and music is most important for celebrate.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your second revision of last week\'s homework. The corrected version appears below.
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Jean~~
How do food and music continue to celebrations?
The food is happy to people and music is fun and happy to people for celebrate.
>>> Food makes people happy, and music is fun and enjoyable when people celebrate.
So food and music is most important for celebrate.
>>> Therefore, food and music are the most important parts of a celebration.
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