How do holidays affect your mood and productivity?
학생이 쓴 원문
I tend to feel tired easy.
So, holiday is necessary for me.
Holiday make me refresh and charge.
It affect my productivity become high.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I tend to feel tired easy.
>> I tend to get tired easily.
So, holiday is necessary for me.
>> So, holidays are necessary for me.
Holiday make me refresh and charge.
>> Holidays help me relax, refresh, and recharge.
It affect my productivity become high.
>> They improve my productivity and help me perform better.
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