How do I do?

2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

Thesedays I hang out with three women- My baby's friend's mommy. But one of them is about 10 years older than me. She is in her foties. We don't hit it off. I can't talk with her because of generation gap. So I have no fun to spend time. Even so, I can't leave herself. How do I do?

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]!

Good job in writing this composition.

 I can see that this issue bothers you. I would definitely feel the same way if I were in your position. I think all you can do now is try to understand her.

 Maybe you will hit it off someday. But for now, maybe you should keep interacting with her in order to build a friendship and to make the gap between your generations smaller. Someday, hopefully, she will understand your opinions and views as well. Have a great evening Miss. [Name] and your two babies!

Karla

Thesedays I hang out with three women- My baby's friend's mommy.

>>These days, I hang out with two women

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