how do i feel and look when i didn\'t slept enough.
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when I do not sleep enough, I feel tired and forget stuffs easily.
>> When I do not get enough sleep, I feel tired and forget stud easily.
Also, I had trouble at thinking compared to normal days.
>> Also, I have trouble thinking when I don\'t get enough sleep.
According to the study published by Experimental Brain Research, skipping a night of sleep worsen Brain functions including memory, decision-making, reasoning, and problem-solving.
>> According to the study published by Experimental Brain Research, skipping a night of sleep worsens brain functions including memory, decision-making, reasoning, and problem-solving.
I do not seem to be suddenly different for not sleep enough for about a day.
>> I do not seem to be different if I don\'t get enough sleep.
however, if people don\'t sleep enough continuously, it could give some big negative influence to health.
>> However, if people don\'t get enough sleep often, it could give a big negative influence to one\'s health.
for example, the risk of cancer increases without sleep.
>> For example, the risk of cancer increases without sleep.
according to the AASM’s sleep statement, people who slept more than 7 ours has the best mortality rates.
>> According to the AASM’s sleep statement, people who sleep more than 7 hours have the best mortality rates.
too little sleep causes more fine lines, wrinkles, uneven skin color, and looseness of the skin.
>> Too little sleep causes more fine lines, wrinkles, uneven skin color, and looseness of the skin.
The people who don\'t sleep enough were also more dissatisfied with their appearance than their well-rested counterparts.
>> CORRECT
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