How do I value my friendship.

2022-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

학생이 쓴 원문

I think my friendship with my friend is good. Because I always play with him. Second, I always help him. Third, we fight only 5 times in 1 year. Last, me and my friend\'s hobby is the same.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]! Oh, so nice to know that you enjoy your friendship together. Keep safe!

~T. Annie

I think my friendship with my friend is good.

>>Correct!
Because I always play with him.

>>Correct!

OR>> I always play with him.
Second, I always help him.

>>Correct!
Third, we fight only 5 times in 1 year.

>>Third, we fight only 5 times in 1 year.
Last, me and my friend\'s hobby is the same.

>>Lastly, my friend and I have the same hobbies.

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