How do Koreans usually celebrate New Year?
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We do not special thing in new year.
We just eat tteockguk with family.
In korean tradition, tteockguk makes you a year older and gives you a good luck.
So i also ate tteockguk too.
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Unlike for most Western and European countries, New Year is the first day of January and welco[이름]g New Year means a lot of food, festivities and fireworks! Just like in my country too! ^ ^
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We do not special thing in new year.
>>We do not do anything special for New Year.
We just eat tteockguk with family.
We just eat tteockguk with family.
>>CORRECT
In korean tradition, tteockguk makes you a year older and gives you a good luck.
In korean tradition, tteockguk makes you a year older and gives you a good luck.
>>In Korean tradition, eating tteockguk makes you a year older and gives you good luck.
So i also ate tteockguk too.
So i also ate tteockguk too.
>>So I ate tteockguk too.
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