How do people celebrate graduation in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Koreans celebrate graduation by spending time with their loved ones.
They invite friends and family to the graduation ceremony.
They enjoy themselves by giving graduation bouquets and taking pictures together.
Then they go to a restaurant with family to continue the celebration.
강사 첨삭
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How do people celebrate graduation in your country?
Koreans celebrate graduation by spending time with their loved ones.
>>> OR: In Korean culture, graduation is typically celebrated by reconnecting with loved ones.
They invite friends and family to the graduation ceremony.
>>> OR: It is customary for graduates to invite close friends and family to the ceremony.
They enjoy themselves by giving graduation bouquets and taking pictures together.
>>> OR: Their celebration includes heartfelt bouquets and cheerful photo sessions with friends.
Then they go to a restaurant with family to continue the celebration.
>>> To further commemorate the occasion, they dine out with family members.
>>> OR: Following the ceremony, they proceed to a restaurant with family to extend the celebration.
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