How do people in your country show gratitude in Thanksgiving day?
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In our country, many people go to Hometown or meet their friends. Some people doesn\'t go out outside and just take a rest. Almost people in our country go to hometown. When people go to Hometown, they met their grand parents and met cousins or uncles and aunts. And we made tradition food.
It is the people do in thanksgiving in our country.
In our country, many people go to their hometown to meet their family and friends. Some people don\'t go out and just take a rest. Almost all people in our country go to their hometowns to meet their relatives and prepare traditional food, it is our way to celebrate Thanksgiving Day.
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