How do people wear recently?
학생이 쓴 원문
When it comes to fashion, I think many people appeal their sexual attraction to others, which would follows TV entertainer. Women like to wear a short miniskirt and hot pants and men enjoy wearing sneaky jeans or something. However many people persuit free style clothes that are more convient and active than others. Personally I like that kind of clothes. On weekday I always put on a suit with a tie. So at least on weekend, I feel like putting on the casual style clothes. But Many other peole like to get all dressed up even on weekend because of showing.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You have given your nice viewpoints about how people dress nowadays. Anyway, I have included here some of the corrections. Take care!
-T. Lei
When it comes to fashion, I think many people appeal their sexual attraction to others, which would follows TV entertainer.
>> I think many people exhibit their sexual attraction to others through fashion and TV entertainments.
Women like to wear a short miniskirt and hot pants and men enjoy wearing sneaky jeans or something.
>> Women like to wear a miniskirt and hot pants and men enjoy wearing sneaky jeans or something.
However many people persuit free style clothes that are more convient and active than others.
>> However many people still prefer free-style clothes that are more convient and more comfortable to wear.
Personally I like that kind of clothes.
>> Personally, I like that kind of clothes.
On weekday I always put on a suit with a tie.
>> On weekdays, I always put on a suit with a tie.
So at least on weekend, I feel like putting on the casual style clothes.
>> Correct.
But Many other peole like to get all dressed up even on weekend because of showing.
>> But many other people like to get all dressed up even on weekends because they love to show off their unique way of dressing themselves.
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