How do solve your own problems?

2019-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 James

학생이 쓴 원문

I discusse my own problems to my friends whenever I face some issues. I tend to think one way in the problem so that I ask others. Thus, I am able to get diverse ideas for solving issues. It is easy to pick up the best choice. Therefore, I recomend someone who think alone to share your problems and to ask others. You feel more relax and comfortable.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this answer, [이름] :)

- Teacher James

I discusse my own problems to my friends whenever I face some issues.

>>> I discuss my own problems to my friends.

I tend to think one way in the problem so that I ask others.

>>> I tend to think one way into the problem so that I ask others.

Thus, I am able to get diverse ideas for solving issues. It is easy to pick up the best choice.

>>> CORRECT

Therefore, I recomend someone who think alone to share your problems and to ask others.

>>> Therefore, I recommend someone who thinks alone to share your problems and to ask others.

You feel more relax and comfortable.

>>> CORRECT

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