How do the seasons affect your mood or energy levels?
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i don\'t like winter. because when i was cold, i wearing many clothes.
so i feel unconfortable. and i feel frustrating.
and i want sleep every day in winter.
same as when sleep animal during winter.
but i like summer better than winter.
because i feel less than hot. so i eatting icecream and patbingsu.
that are very delicious and sweet. i like sweet things.
but try to less eat now a days. because i for healtylife.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me that you prefer summer over winter because at least you can eat delicious desserts in summer. I feel the same way as you when it comes to cold weather. I just want to hibernate like what animals do, just sleeping and lying down in bed all the time. Great job in writing! Just take note that \"I\" is always capitalized.
- T. Caitlyn
i don\'t like winter. because when i was cold, i wearing many clothes.
>> I don’t like winter because when I’m cold, I wear many clothes.
so i feel unconfortable. and i feel frustrating.
so i feel unconfortable. and i feel frustrating.
>> So I feel uncomfortable, and I feel frustrated.
and i want sleep every day in winter.
and i want sleep every day in winter.
>> Also, I want to sleep every day in winter.
same as when sleep animal during winter.
same as when sleep animal during winter.
>> It’s like how animals sleep during winter.
but I like summer better than winter.
but I like summer better than winter.
>> CORRECT
because i feel less than hot. so i eatting icecream and patbingsu.
because i feel less than hot. so i eatting icecream and patbingsu.
>> Because I feel hot, so I eat ice cream and patbingsu.
that are very delicious and sweet.
that are very delicious and sweet.
>> They are very delicious and sweet.
I like sweet things.
>> CORRECT
but try to less eat now a days. because i for healtylife.
but try to less eat now a days. because i for healtylife.
>> But I try to eat less nowadays because I want a healthy life.
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