How do toys influence a child’s imagination and creativity?
학생이 쓴 원문
Toys have various colors and sounds.
It makes children more creative.
Because, toys are not giving a directions. children can imagine freely.
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Toys have various colors and sounds.
>> CORRECT
>> Toys come in different colors and make different sounds.
>> They make children more creative.
Because, toys are not giving a directions. children can imagine freely.
>> This is because toys do not give specific directions, so children can imagine freely.
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