How do transportation apps influence the way people travel today?
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Well, I think there are more positive influences.
There are two reasons why I think so.
First, we suffer less and work less. This is because we can move quickly through the transportation app and we don\'t have to go out on the side of the road to call a taxi. However, we will need to pay a little bit.
Second, we can reduce errors in misrouting and get information about your surroundings. This because setting a destination and using a transportation app can prevent errors that go wrong and can easily obtain and use information about the surroundings through the app.
But for the elderly who can\'t use transportation apps well and have to check the small letters on their phones, these will have a negative impact. Because how to use the app is too difficult for them, I don\'t know it well, and I have to check it hard, so I\'m sure it\'s very difficult.
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Well, I think there are more positive influences.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Overall, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
There are two reasons why I think so.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My opinion is based on two reasons.
First, we suffer less and work less.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: First, we experience less inconvenience and effort.
This is because we can move quickly through the transportation app and we don\'t have to go out on the side of the road to call a taxi.
>> This is because we can book rides quickly through transportation apps and no longer need to wait on the roadside to get a taxi.
However, we will need to pay a little bit.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: However, we do need to pay a small fee.
Second, we can reduce errors in misrouting and get information about your surroundings.
>> Second, we can reduce routing errors and get information about our surroundings.
This because setting a destination and using a transportation app can prevent errors that go wrong and can easily obtain and use information about the surroundings through the app.
>> This is because setting a destination in the app helps prevent routing mistakes, and it also allows users to easily access information about their surroundings.
But for the elderly who can\'t use transportation apps well and have to check the small letters on their phones, these will have a negative impact.
>> But for elderly people who struggle to use transportation apps and read the small text on their phones, this can have a negative impact.
Because how to use the app is too difficult for them, I don\'t know it well, and I have to check it hard, so I\'m sure it\'s very difficult.
>> Because using the app is too difficult for them, and because they struggle to understand it and read the small text, it becomes very challenging.
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