How do we define life?
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강사 첨삭
Hi Ye Na,
Life is what you make of it—or, if you have the opportunity and knowledge, what you can make of it. Keep learning, and keep in mind that there are no quick fixes. Sometimes, life only gives you one shot or take. Life is like a story within a story. Beyond what we see on the surface, there is more to life. There are numerous levels and layers to life. Additionally, you will never comprehend the entire picture if you cannot see beneath the surface. So unless you need to focus on something important, it\'s best to choose multi-mined awareness over single-minded awareness.
~Teacher Cathy
This is a difficult question for me.
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OR>> This is a difficult question for me to answer.
Because always I live the moment.
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OR>> Because I always enjoy the moment.
When I awake in the morning and take a shower, I decide on the day\'s plan.
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OR>> When I wake up in the morning and shower, I think about the day’s plan.
I say do my best on this day.
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OR>> I tell myself to do my best on this day.
Some people say life is war.
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OR>> Others say that life is a war.
But I don\'t think that way.
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My life is a way to journey to the unknown.
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OR>> My life is a journey to the unknown.
So I\'ll do my best and enjoy the moment step by step, and stay positive.
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OR>> So I always do my best, enjoy the moment step by step, and stay optimistic.
But these days little bit tired, because I am nearing the end of my degree program.
>> But I get slightly tired these days because my degree program is almost ending.
If I finish my ph.D., I\'ll enjoy my life more.
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OR>> When I finish my Ph.D., I’ll enjoy life more.
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