How do we prevent gender inequality?
학생이 쓴 원문
Women should have an ability to make equal to men. Even though women have a proper ability, sometimes women treated poorly. When they got it, they should express their opinion.
강사 첨삭
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Here are your corrections:
>> Women should have the ability to become equal with men.
Even though women have a proper ability, sometimes women treated poorly.
>> Even though women have proper abilities, sometimes they are treated poorly.
When they got it, they should express their opinion
>> When they have it, they should express their opinions.
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