How do weekends affect your mood or energy?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I spent my weekend taking a rest or meeting friends, it usually make me happy. But, in the other view, it make me urgent. Because I didn\'t research anything, there\'re a lot of work to do after weekends. So, I always busy on Monday.
Though the situation might be worse when I didn\'t work on weekends, having a break refresh my mental well-being and give energy to work on next weekday.
강사 첨삭
That’s a great and realistic answer, Mary! You expressed both sides of the weekend experience very well, how it brings happiness and rest, but also a bit of pressure afterward. Your sentence flow is improving, and your ideas are clear and relatable. Keep balancing your thoughts like this, it shows strong critical thinking and natural English expression!
-Teacher Wela
If I spent my weekend taking a rest or meeting friends, it usually make me happy.
>> If I spend my weekend resting or meeting friends, it usually makes me happy.
But, in the other view, it make me urgent.
>> However, on the other hand, it also makes me feel a bit anxious.
Because I didn\'t research anything, there\'re a lot of work to do after weekends.
>> Since I didn’t do any research, there is a lot of work to do after the weekend.
So, I always busy on Monday.
>> As a result, I’m always busy on Mondays.
Though the situation might be worse when I didn\'t work on weekends, having a break refresh my mental well-being and give energy to work on next weekday.
>> Even though the situation might get worse when I don’t work on weekends, taking a break helps refresh my mind and gives me the energy to work during the next week.
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