How do world look after 10 years?
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The world is being polluted with lots of things. Global warming is also serious problem but now we are in pain because of covid-19. But I think after 10 years the circumstance will getting worse and maybe we should fight with some pendemic stronger than covid-19. And I think someday we should buy oxygen to breathe. I’m little bit afraid of future but all we can do is trying to safe the earth.
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The world is being polluted with lots of things.
>>CORRECT
Global warming is also serious problem but now we are in pain because of covid-19.
>> Global warming is also a serious problem but now we are in pain because of covid-19.
But I think after 10 years the circumstance will getting worse and maybe we should fight with some pandemic stronger than covid-19.
>> But I think after 10 years, the circumstance will get worse and maybe there\'s a stronger pandemic that might happen.
And I think someday we should buy oxygen to breathe.
>> CORRECT
I’m little bit afraid of future but all we can do is trying to safe the earth.
>>I’m little bit afraid about what the future holds but all we can do is try to save the earth.
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