How do yo call your boss when talk with him?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Whin I go into my boss room, excuse me sir, I need your approve. First time to met him, He said please call \'Santi, or Santiago\'. So I said you can call me \'[이름]\'.
My boss is from Spain. So he has a free stayle mind to call \'position\' of conpany.
In Korea, we have to call \' Sir, president, Boss\'.
I can not call his name. If I call his name, he think, are you crazy?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], Thank you for taking some time to do your homework. It is very much appreciated. See you later. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
Dear [Name],
Whin I go into my boss room, excuse me sir, I need your approve.
In Korea, we have to call \' Sir, president, Boss\'.
I can not call his name.
Dear [Name],
Whin I go into my boss room, excuse me sir, I need your approve.
>> When I go into my boss\' room, I will say, \"Excuse me sir, I need your approval\".
First time to met him, He said please call \'Santi, or Santiago\'. So I said you can call me \'[이름]\'.
>> The first time I met him, he said, \"Please call me Santi or Santiago\" and I replied, \"You can call me [이름]\".
My boss is from Spain. So he has a free stayle mind to call \'position\' of conpany.
>> Sorry [이름] but I didn\'t understand what you meant hear but let me try.
>> My boss is from Spain so he is open to any call of \'position\' of the company.
>> In Korea, we use the words, sir, president, and boss.
>> I can\'t call him by his name.
If I call his name, he think, are you crazy?
>> If I do that, he will think that I am crazy.
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