How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?

2021-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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First, I smile when I am happy, because I can be more happier if I laugh and smile. And I like to be with happy people, because I can be more happier if I am with happy people than sad people. I am trying to be happy because if I am happy, I will laugh and I will smile. I saw a book that says laughing and smiling is good for our health.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


First, I smile when I am happy, because I can be more happier if I laugh and smile. 

>> First, I smile when I am happy because I can be happier if I laugh and smile. 

And I like to be with happy people, because I can be more happier if I am with happy people than sad people. 

>> Also, I like to be with happy people because I can be happier if I am with happy people than being with sad people. 

I am trying to be happy because if I am happy, I will laugh and I will smile. 

>> CORRECT!

I saw a book that says laughing and smiling is good for our health.

>> CORRECT!

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