How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
First, I smile when I am happy, because I can be more happier if I laugh and smile.
>> First, I smile when I am happy because I can be happier if I laugh and smile.
And I like to be with happy people, because I can be more happier if I am with happy people than sad people.
>> Also, I like to be with happy people because I can be happier if I am with happy people than being with sad people.
I am trying to be happy because if I am happy, I will laugh and I will smile.
>> CORRECT!
I saw a book that says laughing and smiling is good for our health.
>> CORRECT!
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