How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I guess some of people will do as me. When I got happy, I tend to laugh a lot more. I believe there\'s nothing better expression than laughing. And of course, I love when I\'m with happy people who are my family, close friends and you. :)
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Fantastic Tuesday to you, Elic! Coming together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success. Don’t limit yourself, success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day-in and day-out.
I guess some of people will do as me.
>>I guess a lot of people would want to be surrounded with happy people.
When I got happy, I tend to laugh a lot more.
>> When I am happy, I tend to laugh more.
I believe there\'s nothing better expression than laughing.
>> CORRECT
And of course, I love when I\'m with happy people who are my family, close friends and you. :)
>> And of course, I love it when I\'m with happy people such as my family, close friends, and you.
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