How do you avoid forgetting your plans?

2024-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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When I was younger than now. I could remember everthing. I didn\'t need to make a note. But now I make a note not to forget my plans. I don\'t get used to make a note. I made back up plans. I never smoke, One of my high school teacher said, smoking could impair my memory abilities. I excercise every evening. It meants I try to stay young. Because age renders everything useless.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]ny!
No wonder you still have a memory of an elephant! I shall do those as well. ^^
~ Trixia

Content:
When I was younger than now. 
- CORRECT.
I could remember everthing. 
I could remember everything. 
I didn\'t need to make a note. 
- CORRECT.
But now I make a note not to forget my plans. 
- CORRECT.
I don\'t get used to make a note. 
- I don\'t get used to making notes. 
I made back up plans. 
- I made backup plans. 
I never smoke, One of my high school teacher said, smoking could impair my memory abilities. 
I never smoke. One of my high school teachers said smoking could impair my memory abilities. 
I excercise every evening. 
- I exercise every evening. 
It meants I try to stay young.
- It meant I tried to stay young. 
Because age renders everything useless.
- CORRECT.

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