How do you balance chores, hobbies, and social life on weekends?
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How do you balance chores, hobbies, and social life on weekends?
I usually do my chores 3times every week if I have enough power after my work or before going work.
I bought electronic mopping object a few months ago, but I seldom use it on weekdays because there is a electronic line with the machine.
It feels like bothering me to move it. So I almost use it like wet tissues for the floor to clean.
I have hobbies like going cafes, reading webtoons or watching TV.
So, I usually spend time for my hobbies after all my works.
I didn’t plan anything , however they are planned by something what I didn’t know.
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I usually do my chores 3times every week if I have enough power after my work or before going work.
I bought electronic mopping object a few months ago, but I seldom use it on weekdays because there is a electronic line with the machine.
It feels like bothering me to move it. So I almost use it like wet tissues for the floor to clean.
>> I usually do my chores three times a week if I have enough energy after work or before going to work.
I bought electronic mopping object a few months ago, but I seldom use it on weekdays because there is a electronic line with the machine.
>> I bought an electric mop a few months ago, but I rarely use it on weekdays because it has a power cord.
It feels like bothering me to move it. So I almost use it like wet tissues for the floor to clean.
>> It feels bothersome to move it around, so I usually use the electric mop like wet wipes to clean the floor.
I have hobbies like going cafes, reading webtoons or watching TV.
>> I have hobbies such as going to cafés, reading webtoons, and watching TV.
>> I have hobbies such as going to cafés, reading webtoons, and watching TV.
So, I usually spend time for my hobbies after all my works.
>> After finishing all my work, I usually spend time on my hobbies.
>> After finishing all my work, I usually spend time on my hobbies.
I didn’t plan anything , however they are planned by something what I didn’t know.
>> I didn’t plan anything; however, things were planned by something I wasn’t aware of.
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