How do you balance relaxation and responsibilities while at home?
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I have a monthly plan that I have to follow every day. For example, I have to finish chapter 3 ~ 4 of the psychology theory book and
take an online course. After that, I can relax and take a break.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Your plan sounds well-organized! I hope you find time to relax and enjoy your break once you complete everything.
~Kelly^^
I have a monthly plan that I have to follow every day.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I follow a monthly plan every day.
For example, I
have to finish chapter 3 ~ 4 of the psychology theory book and take an online course.
>> Correct
OR:
>> For example, I need to finish chapters 3 and 4 of the psychology theory book and take an online course.
After that, I can relax and take a break.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Once I have finished, I will be able to relax and take a break
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