How do you balance rest and productivity during the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think I usually have good balance during the weekend.
Someday, I felt so tired whole weekend and I always prayed for taking a nap every weekend.
I might be sick, so I felt tired a lot at that time.
Opposite, These days I feel better than before, because I\'m working out steadily 2 days a week, except last week.
I can feel effects of exercise and I believe that I can have healthy life if I do it regulary.
I know it is not easy, but I\'m tring to push me to do it.
I don\'t want my phisycal to getting older than now.
It\'s not scary about getting old, but my son is still child.
강사 첨삭
I don\'t think I usually have good balance during the weekend.
Someday, I felt so tired whole weekend and I always prayed for taking a nap every weekend.
>> One weekend, I felt so tired the whole time and wished I could take a nap all weekend.
I can feel effects of exercise and I believe that I can have healthy life if I do it regulary.
>> I can feel the effects of exercise, and I believe I can have a healthy life if I do it regularly.
>> I don’t think I usually have a good balance on the weekends.
Someday, I felt so tired whole weekend and I always prayed for taking a nap every weekend.
>> One weekend, I felt so tired the whole time and wished I could take a nap all weekend.
I might be sick, so I felt tired a lot at that time.
>> I might have been sick, so I felt very tired at that time.
>> I might have been sick, so I felt very tired at that time.
Opposite, These days I feel better than before, because I\'m working out steadily 2 days a week, except last week.
>> In contrast, these days I feel better than before because I work out regularly two days a week, except last week.
I can feel effects of exercise and I believe that I can have healthy life if I do it regulary.
>> I can feel the effects of exercise, and I believe I can have a healthy life if I do it regularly.
I know it is not easy, but I\'m tring to push me to do it.
>> I know it is not easy, but I’m trying to push myself to do it.
>> I know it is not easy, but I’m trying to push myself to do it.
I don\'t want my phisycal to getting older than now.
>> I don’t want my physical condition to get worse as I get older.
>> I don’t want my physical condition to get worse as I get older.
It\'s not scary about getting old, but my son is still child.
>> I’m not scared of getting old, but my son is still a child.
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