How do you balance rest and productivity in your daily routine?
학생이 쓴 원문
I distinguish between work time and break time for my balance rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because without rest I become negative.
강사 첨삭
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I distinguish between work time and break time for my balance rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because without rest I become negative.
>> I distinguish between work time and break time to maintain a balance between rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because, without it, I become negative.
OR >> I differentiate between work hours and break times to keep a balance of rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is essential, as I become negative without it.
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