How do you become more patient at work?
학생이 쓴 원문
Try to find gratitude things in work and find a way to release the stress from work.
For example, I look back on the day and write a journal about my feeling.
Find out what was touch my emotions and release it.
IF I feel anger at work, I go work out hard to express the negative emotions.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Rachel!
Patience is a very valuable skill in the workplace and for your personal life. It inspires productivity, positivity, freedom, and it builds your reputation at work. Some who do not possess patience may possibly because they have little patience and tolerance for themselves. It is a choice to hone it.
It seems that you have much of it in you. Thus choose it all the time to level up your professional skill.
Below, my grammar suggestions include having a subject in the sentence and that us as simple as having the pronoun \'I\'. For the others, study them carefully.
See you in class later.
-T. Donna~
>> It is trying to find gratitude at and finding a way to release the stress from work.
For example, I look back on the day and write a journal about my feeling.
For example, I look back on the day and write a journal about my feeling.
>> Correct!
Or: feelings
Find out what was touch my emotions and release it.
>> I like to find out what touches my emotions and release it.
IF I feel anger at work, I go work out hard to express the negative emotions.
>> Correct!
Or: If I feel anger at work, I work out hard to express the negative emotions.
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